tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post7881167453802597073..comments2024-03-23T07:08:08.246-04:00Comments on Vanessa Victoria Kilmer: Poetry Share - ClicheNessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-39944937734892814432014-03-08T16:36:48.413-05:002014-03-08T16:36:48.413-05:00Nice, and you don't spare yourself - that'...Nice, and you don't spare yourself - that's what really makes it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-5415048829931192892013-06-18T13:56:14.541-04:002013-06-18T13:56:14.541-04:00Vivid and clever. Well doneVivid and clever. Well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-74080750021349986582013-06-18T13:52:02.675-04:002013-06-18T13:52:02.675-04:00Love is bliss
but without a kiss
its the one you m...Love is bliss<br />but without a kiss<br />its the one you miss<br /><br /><br />Very sad . . . goatmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02317617928368945316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-39716883662436312822013-06-17T19:38:08.534-04:002013-06-17T19:38:08.534-04:00You threw in lots of cliches and they worked so we...You threw in lots of cliches and they worked so well together! Nice work!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-67089374499071171742013-06-17T18:00:52.284-04:002013-06-17T18:00:52.284-04:00very good and raw..have been there and felt that p...very good and raw..have been there and felt that pain.It seemed very real to me.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-45615055732664510372013-06-17T16:56:42.189-04:002013-06-17T16:56:42.189-04:00Thanks for giving us this beautiful poem, beautifu...Thanks for giving us this beautiful poem, beautiful photo!<br />Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-38283931380304790902013-06-17T16:10:43.894-04:002013-06-17T16:10:43.894-04:00ugh nothing hurts like being hurt by the one that ...ugh nothing hurts like being hurt by the one that you love....it slices deep...esp when you believed....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-61922132688545486872013-06-17T15:22:00.302-04:002013-06-17T15:22:00.302-04:00I read somewhere once that its good to take a clic...I read somewhere once that its good to take a cliche and make it your own when writing because people sense a familiarity with your words.Vanessa Victoria Kilmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14923111066345543260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-37675551129193803592013-06-17T15:20:17.267-04:002013-06-17T15:20:17.267-04:00I read yours. It was very good.I read yours. It was very good.Vanessa Victoria Kilmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14923111066345543260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-17483480762856287502013-06-17T14:22:52.557-04:002013-06-17T14:22:52.557-04:00Oh wow the drama, the pain, the intensity amazing ...Oh wow the drama, the pain, the intensity amazing truly it doesn't sound cliche (despite the cliches used) it sounds very raw and very real. Amazing =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-54566323019315238822013-06-17T13:47:13.549-04:002013-06-17T13:47:13.549-04:00Love your cliche poem! I submitted one as well. ...Love your cliche poem! I submitted one as well. This was the first time I played along with a prompt and it was fun :)Wordifull Melaniehttp://wordifull.comnoreply@blogger.com