tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post2665318461885510139..comments2024-03-23T07:08:08.246-04:00Comments on Vanessa Victoria Kilmer: D is for DogwoodNessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-2877221688981629602008-05-31T20:33:00.000-04:002008-05-31T20:33:00.000-04:00The colors are the emotions expressed in my dreams...The colors are the emotions expressed in my dreams the subjects paint themselves. Not always are the dreams clear and nice, but reality is also that way. so I do not dwell too long in each.<BR/>Can I link ur poem it gives me a nice dreamLloyd Irving Bradburyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02244975343544170209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-51071854687326980782008-05-16T23:19:00.000-04:002008-05-16T23:19:00.000-04:00It is obvious that I was not very effective in tha...It is obvious that I was not very effective in that "making you play" attempt. Feel free to jump back in any time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-85452993853178867832008-05-08T02:03:00.000-04:002008-05-08T02:03:00.000-04:00Soooooooooooooooo pretty!!!Soooooooooooooooo pretty!!!don't call me MA'AMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11439448178708339536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-84234163389495991862008-05-06T13:06:00.000-04:002008-05-06T13:06:00.000-04:00beautiful dogwood, great idea in the haiku.however...beautiful dogwood, great idea in the haiku.<BR/>however, i always tend to shorten the verse (5-7-5 is way outdated and too many syllables compared to the haiku in japanese); more important than syllables is the rhythm and the impression the poem leaves<BR/><BR/>hope you don't mind if i add my version of your verse:<BR/><BR/>dogwood in bloom<BR/>rivers of sunshine<BR/>flow over barkjulianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06299239406082298331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-91084446812825017322008-05-05T10:03:00.000-04:002008-05-05T10:03:00.000-04:00Actually... I LOVED your last poem... I just thou...Actually... I LOVED your last poem... I just thought the rules were to "brain tasky" for me... NOT that I don't like a poetic challenge from time to time... I do! Just not yesterday. Or today. But SOMEday I'm going to do one! And I'll invite YOU to read it when I do! LOL! (not that you'll want to...)<BR/><BR/>As for today... I love dogwoods and Haiku!Mellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16266127127286739779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-29382855041839801192008-05-05T06:54:00.000-04:002008-05-05T06:54:00.000-04:00Very beautiful shot and lovely haiku!!Very beautiful shot and lovely haiku!!MaRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04627282961669893082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-71213699632417962902008-05-04T23:52:00.000-04:002008-05-04T23:52:00.000-04:00Lovely picture and a nice poeme !Lovely picture and a nice poeme !Gattinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636525277807715146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-75617824535851165332008-05-04T23:36:00.000-04:002008-05-04T23:36:00.000-04:00Such pretty colors. Glad you are playing along :)...Such pretty colors. Glad you are playing along :)Minkydohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09790058909258945953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-71129401031833916792008-05-04T23:18:00.000-04:002008-05-04T23:18:00.000-04:00Great colors in this one. You captured it well. :...Great colors in this one. You captured it well. :)Roberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02074502919190699746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-77437945760433349212008-05-04T19:04:00.000-04:002008-05-04T19:04:00.000-04:00Beautiful dogwood - I wish I could grow it here. ...Beautiful dogwood - I wish I could grow it here. I like your Haiku too :)tsduffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06457805824149563737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-56721348234078902892008-05-04T17:35:00.000-04:002008-05-04T17:35:00.000-04:00Fine. I'll stop whining and play with good grace=)...Fine. I'll stop whining and play with good grace=)Nessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19255072.post-20154556951034694632008-05-04T16:02:00.000-04:002008-05-04T16:02:00.000-04:00Lovely photo.Lovely poem.Lovely sportsmanship.Okay...Lovely photo.<BR/><BR/>Lovely poem.<BR/><BR/>Lovely sportsmanship.<BR/><BR/>Okay, two out of three isn't bad. <BR/><BR/>;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com