Friday, March 18, 2011

Flash 55 - If Memory Serves

it’s been a while since I’ve written in double fives
and I find myself breaking out in hives
do I remember how to do it
is it like riding a bike
I have to make my thoughts fit
like a finger in a dike
and say something that doesn’t stink like chives
hoping everyone survives


Write a story in exactly 55 words.




Merry Meet and Blessed Be







16 comments:

  1. and you rhyme pretty well...smiles. good to see you more and more nessa!

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  2. and looky there! we did survive and enjoyed every morsel!

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  3. Vanessa Kilmer
    The long Lost sister returns
    Please don't leave again!!


    'Missed You' Haiku
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  4. Good job...here's a high five for you hives and chives.

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  5. you did super well...

    honest and lovely words.
    Happy Weekend.

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  6. You wrangled and roped fifty-five words and corralled them perfectly!

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  7. (falls over dead)



    Just kidding! (LOL!) Nice 55!

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  8. yay!! She jumps back in and lands a 55!!

    We've missed you so much.

    And funny -- I can no longer write anything other than 55 words. :)

    xoxo

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  9. Well well well.. you certainly have succeeded, Ness!! :) And we have survived too... ;-) So, don't you worry!! :))

    Lotsa love!!

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  10. Fantastic flash fifty-five! And I love your quote, too:)

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  11. Sometimes my thoughts fit like a finger in a dike. Do that for very long and you will lose a finger.
    Then it will stink worse than chives.
    ..
    Oh yes, good 55.
    ..

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  12. I didn't count the words, but it seems to me you remembered how to do it. Good job.

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  13. You did well. I haven't done one for ages either.

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  14. Nice it was well written..the last lone made me smile..lol.Nice 55 again!

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