Monday, January 24, 2011

microfiction Monday – I’ll Be Damned

Susan’s Picture:

 riverside

My Story:

 Grasshopper: I'm not sure about this.
Sensei: We must test to see if you have learned; if you've evolved.
Grasshopper: But walking on water?


Write a story in 140 characters
using the picture Susan provides as inspiration.


 
Hosted by Susan @ Stony River


 
Merry Meet and Blessed Be


36 comments:

  1. Yup the ice is very thin out there- Good one! Thanks.

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  2. hehe, or hopping on water?

    Is that the Susquehanna? Maybe it's frozen.

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  3. What a picture? You captured the essence perfect.

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  4. Love the way you think (and write!)

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  5. This was funny!
    I just wonder if he did it!
    Have a good week ahead my friend!

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  6. Ah! expectations!! What a big smile to start my day, Nessa! I love it! Have a great day and enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  7. The mist does look thick enough to walk on. Wonder if Grasshopper will give it a try.

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  8. Give it a shot. What's the worst that can happen? You get a little wet? Or eaten by a sea monster.

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  9. If that works maybe he will next learn how to feed hundreds with one loaf of bread! Great mm. I enjoyed reading it.
    Have a wonderful week. Cheers~

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  10. maybe he could jump..?
    i like what you say with this short story - very good!

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  11. Maybe that Grasshopper can hop over instead of walk....? :O)

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  12. Ah - good fit and fun way to see the pic!

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  13. Oh good one! (That walking on water thing is SO done, anyhow ... LOL)

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  14. LOL. You always have so much fun with a given prompt. Have a great day :)

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  15. This reminds me of how clouds always look so substantial until you're inside them.

    You made me think, Nessa. That's a good thing. ;-)

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  16. This is an excellent microfiction nessa.
    I like this a lot

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  17. Very different, Nessa, but good! :)

    Got to watch those Sensei believers. Be careful, they soon will have us all drowning ourselves.
    ..

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  18. I hope he brought a towel and a change of clothes.

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  19. I liked this one, it fits the image perfectly.;))
    xoxo

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  20. Cool idea for that picture. Imaginative.

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