Friday, September 10, 2010

Flash 55 - Indignities

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Caught in a lie and a broken promise, 
he understood that he had to pay. 
To be forever caged in a foreign form, 
cold, hard and unyielding, 
was the agreed upon punishment. 
He resigned him self to that fate. 
But did the witch have to give him 
a yellow handle thus always 
identifying his cowardice? 
0 - green butterflyWrite a story in exactly 55 words.
Judy (I would link to you but the one in the comment is not working) got all of yesterday's questions correct with the following exceptions:


#5 was the half - those are things I collect but most can often be found on my desk at different times.


#10 - These are nicknames I had as a child.


0 - v

33 comments:

  1. Interesting concept to ponder: hell or prison, the punishment is being stuck with others just like you.

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  2. Hell hath no furry as a witch scorned :) Excellent 55 Happy Friday :)

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  3. i like the color yellow...its the flopping wheel or the sticking wheel i would worry about...dont most of those carts have one...nice 55.

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  4. Clever take on being behind bars...

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  5. Tom & Icy: What a horrible fate that would be. I’d hate to spend eternity with people like me.

    Thom: That’s right. Watch your step, mister.

    Brian Miller: There’s nothing worse than a bum wheel.

    anthonynorth: Shopping carts are people too.

    5thsister: I was bored waiting for my hubby to bring me alcohol.

    Jinksy: Sitting doing nothing is like a prison to me some times.

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  6. Broken promise and a lie? Oh that needs a punishment, definitely..Awesome 55, Nessa!

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  7. Wonderful writing..as always! Have a sparkling wkd Nessa!

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  8. Only One person
    Thinks of Morphing Shopping Carts
    Vanessa Kilmer


    Deliciously Different 55 My Dear.
    You Rock!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  9. Very Karmic....Here's my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well

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  10. Mumsy: One or the other, you might give a second chance, but not both together.

    Kiki: My daughter is bring me green quartz from the Outer banks so I think I will.

    G-Man: Different has always been the polite word for what happens in my mind, but you made it special by adding the delicious part.


    John's comments: Karma is my friend.

    Noe Noe Girl...A Queen of all Trades.: She will always get you in the end.

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  11. Sounds like "The Scarlet Letter" all over again - too many people are still comfortable (even these days) labeling people.

    A thought-provoking 55, Vanessa!

    Have a great weekend!

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  12. Reminds me of something that would happen on Twilight Zone. I think I will name my cart next time I go shopping. You never know who has een cast into a shopping cart.

    Great read.

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  13. Not "My Mother the Car", but My Coward the Shopping Cart". Loved it. So creative.

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  14. amazing 55.
    well played!

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  15. That was one wicked witch, who lived up to her true color ;)

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  16. Great 55... but then, they always are!

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  17. Tsk. I wouldn't even notice the yellow handle if you didn't point it out.

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  18. The shopping carts are in a cage because homeless people take them and put all their belongings in them?

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  19. Eric Alder: I believe in judgment and condemnation and everyone should know about it. ;)


    Finding Pam: I never thought of that. I liked that show. It was weird and spooky.

    Monkey Man: Good name. Do you think I should do a Script submission? Nostalgia with a twist?

    Jingle: Thanks.

    Mona: She doesn’t like to be messed with, that’s for sure.

    Together We Save: Thank-you very much.

    Alice Audrey: See how helpful i am to you. I live to serve.

    Karen a.: Actually what is happening is that the homeless people are taking the shopping carts out for they daily exercise routine.

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  20. Thank you Nessa. I can visualize that now. Do any of the homeless people have yellow hair?

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  21. I would not want a fate of the shopping cart - germy little buggers too.

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  22. Cowardice always shows. No matter what the witch had turned him into, some part of him would have been yellow.

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  23. Very nicely written Nessa. Have a great weekend.

    My 55 is here.

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  24. This felt like an experience I went through earlier this year. This is an incredible piece.

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  25. karen a.: Yellow and purple, green and red, blue and orange – they are a happy people.
    Sue: The germs are like pilot fish are to sharks.

    quilly: The marking part was the most important part of the spell.

    KB: Thanks. I hope your weekend will be great, too.

    SandyCarlson: I hope you are not still a shopping cart. Oops. I suspect that’s not the part you meant. ;)

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  26. Awww. That would be a dreadful punishment indeed.

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  27. Awww. That would be a dreadful punishment indeed.

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  28. secret agent woman: But well deserved in this case.

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  29. Great 55!

    Have a great Sunday!

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  30. Eden: I hope your Sunday is fantastic.

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