Thursday, June 17, 2010

Thursday 13 – A Love Story Gone Wrong

Johnny showed up at my house on Thursday,


With a message from his boss in the form of medical traction.


My arms in desperate pain, I protested any infraction.


“The love potion you sold him failed.”


“Impossible,” I wailed.


“Did he drink it at midnight on the dot?”


“Right on the witching hour’s spot.”


“Did he stand naked under the full moon?”


“Just like a love hungry loon.”


“Did he gaze upon his lady love?”


“Yes, the woman as sweet as a turtle dove.”


“Sounds as if the potion passes.”


“No, she wore mirrored sunglasses.”

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21 comments:

  1. Narcissis in female form?

    I swiped something from you. Let me know if I should take it down.

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  2. Aw, that really wrecked his evil plan. Poor guy.

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  3. LOL So much for the effort. The lady seems smarter than him.

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  4. Well, at least he's found someone who will never leave him! Unless, of course, he drops the mirror! LOL!

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  5. Oh, poor guy.;) And a smart girl.;)
    I loved the movie *Love Potion #9*.;)
    Have a great day,
    xoxo

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  6. What a fun prose to read..."mirrored sunglasses"-perfect foil to the plan!

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  7. Can I say it? I LOVED your Love Potion Prose!! How excellent, and lots of fun AND humor...a perfect mix.

    Come join me and read my Thursday post of you can. It's HERE

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  8. haha. loved your twist nd the rhyme scheme...

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  9. Awesome! Very clever prose.
    Happy T13!

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  10. Fantastic. I thought that was just great.

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  11. Yikes- bummer for someone :)


    Have a great Thursday!
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  12. Ah-ha-ha! I love this. Very cute!

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  13. OH, for the love of our own reflection.

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  14. hahaha that was some good fun :)

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