Monday, June 14, 2010

microfiction Monday – Oh, Pardon Me!

beautyandthebeast My Story:

 Lorna Doone came to realize pulling a monkey from a barrel for her Spring time tea party guest would not be a pleasant olfactory experience. 
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Write a story in 140 characters using the picture she provides as inspiration.
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Tomorrow:
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Tomorrow’s theme: Mayberry, R.F.D.



      


23 comments:

  1. May be she really should have taught him about table manners first. LOL. Have a great week.

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  2. Poor Lorna. Perhaps she should have had a pool party?

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  3. This was a great, I like the "olfactory experience".;) The picture is fun too, brings back my childhood, in fact particularly my sister - as her favorite toy was a monkey.;) She still has him to this day.;)
    xoxo

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  4. So very true - too much monkey business :-)
    Enjoyed that.

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  5. Poor Lorna. I really enjoyed this story, especially the use of 'olfactory'!

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  6. But somehow the bronzed pool boy from a cake was so last year. My 140 story

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  7. One of my favorite cookies! But combining them with monkey smell . . . er . . . you're right! Well done, Nessa!

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  8. AW, so cute..and what a sweet picture!
    Kiki~

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  9. Lorna should have known better!

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  10. Truly, I can smell it!
    you funny one!

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  11. Hilarious---thanks for the early morning laugh! Olfactory...I must come up with a way to use that word in the near future.

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  12. But it is a very cute little smelly monkey. Well done.

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  13. Gotta be careful what Monkey you invite to tea that's for sure.
    LOL
    have a great week.

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  14. Never know what you'll pull out of the barrel these days, that's for sure. And I do hate those unpleasant olfactory experiences! What a great giggle for the morning, Nessa! Hope you have a lovely week!

    Sylvia

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  15. Huh. What happened to the comment I left here yesterday?

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  16. Must have had too many windows open at once. Makes me wonder how many other comments went into the electronic dustbin.

    I just said I thought a seeing eye monkey is a great idea. I could see himriding around on the seeing eye dog and taking things from the shelves at grocery stores. Or, maybe not.

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  17. ha but she sure makes nice cookies...smiles.

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  18. I love monkey's! Especially at tea parties!

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  19. cute one,
    loved it!
    thank you for sharing!

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  20. Love this one...can imagine the smell!

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  21. Hey must have been visiting Georgie, We thought alike. Sorry I am late in visiting.

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